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(1)説明文を作成する場合、同じ単語(動詞)を繰り返し使わない方が印象が良くなります。同じ意味でも単語のバリエーションをもって表現することをお勧めします。下記の例文の上部は同じ単語を繰り返した悪い例、下部は同じ意味の内容を違う単語で表現した良い例です。動詞の一覧も加えましたので、ご参考になさってください。
<悪い例>
Developed an intern program to allow
students to work in nursing homes.
Developed training programs for new
and experienced employees and supervised the new employee orientation
program.
Developed a unique computerized system
which has dramatically increased service to customers.
Developed a team of highly motivated
employees.
<良い例>
Established an intern program to allow
students to work in nursing homes.
Designed training programs for new
and experienced employees and supervised the new employee orientation
program.
Created a unique computerized system
which has dramatically increased service to customers.
Built a team of highly motivated employees.
<アクション系動詞(Action Verbs)>
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